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"Nobody writes about the taste of a man."

It is an unrelentingly human taste. Salt,
sweat, skin. Sweeter in the summertime;
all that ripe fruit, pineapples he can't cut without
injuring himself, juice from a peach spilling
from his mouth and pooling in the palm
of hands that touch me with a purpose,
sometimes without, touching me
just to assure himself that I'm there, idly
dipping his thumbs into the back of my jeans
because he is the only one who can. I know
without looking that he is watching me
and remembering the way my tongue moved
against him, curling
and coaxing. I would rather
suckle the juice from his cupped hands,
rather he tasted like honeydew,
could not ever describe the flavour of him
as pleasing for any reason other
than the sharp intake of breath,
the impossible love I feel for him when he comes.
This stubborn, strong man reduced to a whimper,
pouring himself into me,
shuddering,
and I want it, every drop,
licking and sucking even after it's done because
he wants me to and there is no part of him,
even this, especially this,
that I could ever refuse.
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Because *vespera wrote this poem: [link]

Edit: I've fiddled with the punctuation and wording a couple of times... for some reason, it's really importanted for me to get this piece right. It's sticking with me.

Edit again: Oh gosh, guys, a DLD. Blushing! Thank you incredibly much. :heart: It keeps me going.

Edit AGAIN: You guys. I cannot thank you enough for all the support and comments and faves and the DD and everything. I'm trying really hard to answer everyone's comments BUT I'm at my parents with terrible internet access so it might take me awhile! Thank you all, so, so much. Sincerely. :heart:
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Given 2012-06-18
The taste of a man. by ~this-epiphany This poem drips with an undeniably animal facet of intimacy and an aspect of sexuality seldom examined. ( Suggested by =DailyLitDeviations and Featured by ^Beccalicious )
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~kyubicully Mar 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
omg that was really good and very soulful
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*b1gfan Nov 12, 2012  Student Writer
Yummy is the word for this..yummy :)
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:iconthis-epiphany:
haha, thank you.
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*b1gfan Nov 15, 2012  Student Writer
You're very welcome :)
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:iconjade-pandora:
Your wonderful words are featured here: [link]
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:iconthis-epiphany:
thank you so much :)
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:iconjade-pandora:
You're so very welcome, dear. :heart:
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:iconkissthesunrise:
Congrats on the DLD. This is really well written. It meanders about like lovers do until the last, when love unrestrained blossoms. :heart:
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:iconunoservix:
to be honest, i always pretty much just associated this with porn and its built-in male fantasies. it's interesting to hear about it from a female perspective and what it might mean to her.
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=LoveoftheDark Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW. that is the most amazingly accurate poem on the subject. Beautifully done!
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