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without giving everything away,
there are days too hot to remember,
our bodies shaking dust from the curtains with slow,
familiar rhythm. we did not look
like people, then,
we looked like gods, we looked like lovers,
we couldn't see the ending, then,
we were tangled up in gold.
For ~apsara609... this is making its way into a full piece eventually, but for now, consider it a promise-stanza.
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ilyilaice Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
The imagery is mind-blowing.
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etre-aime Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2009
we looked like giants in the back of my gray subcompact, fumbling to make contact as the others slept inside.
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offbyzero Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
Lol, I've never heard of a promise-stanza. But I like this one.
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HelzCullen Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
I hope the promise stanza doesn't break. :heart: Lovely.
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Nycterisdream Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
I'll see your promise stanza and raise you a high five!
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Student Writer
It is a fine begining :) I love the opening line :)
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ItsxMagik Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Such a pretty piece :heart:
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kali-inanna Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
I like this promise-stanza :)
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TheAfterWhys Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Mmm, the imagery is very soft and beautiful, and it has its own rythm to it as it's read. Wonderful.
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chelx Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(: lovely.
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